SizZlE666's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dylan Sketch]

nice drawing but something seems a little off

i think his eyes aren't tilted, especially his right eye. Kudos anyway

[She's abit of a tease]

picture is flaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat

knox is quite right, i have to add that if you observe the position of her shoulders and her ass they are facing completely opposite directions. not only that but her right breast is far stretched out for her shoulder and overall the picture is very flat. try to block out some of the depth before you get into it.

[The WhiteDragon]

good at a glance, but has errors

The shading and texture were excellent, but I feel that there were some subtle errors the more I looked. The most noticeable one was that the left wing of the character seemed too far back, making it look like it came out from the dragon's rear leg, not the front one. The angles of the hind legs don't seem to correspond with the pose and perspective of the front body. Notice that the position of the dragon's right hind foot and the right front foot is off, the positions of the two left feet are parallel, making the pose a little awkward. It sort of looks like you stuck the rear and front ends of the creature together, without having a middle. lastly, the angle of the jaw doesn't really match the snout all that well, not to mention that the jaw isn't very well defined. Don't fear though, you can easily solve all these problems in the future by making a "block drawing", basically a simple sketch where you block out the general shape of your character, so then you can use the block lines and sides for drawing a solid, perspective adhering pose.

o-eternal-o responds:

Thank you very much for such an indepth review. This is ever so helpful, thank you :D

I definitely agree about the snout. I noticed something wrong with it when i was painting it, but couldn't quite get what it was. The back legs also look kinda weird. I seem to have an issue with anatomy, one i'm trying to overcome, but little errors always seem to crop up XP

The left wing appears to join lower than the right wing due to a misplaced highlight. I was trying to understand what you meant for ages, but i get it now. The highlight between the neck and the right wing shouldn't be there, as it gives the impression that the shape of the wing does indeed connect lower down the back. I actually think i made the left wing come forward too much, as if you look at where the tail appears, there's a little bit of blurred white feathers that are hard to spot. THe left wing actually comes infront of the shoulder, whereas the left wing doesn't.

Again, thank you very much :) I can fix the wing highlight problem easy, but the anatomy and snout problem will have to stay. I think i should spend some time just sketching different poses, without colouring them.